1. When fighting you must always describe your actions against another person or ninja with words like trying to, attempted to, hoping to, etc.
2. Be sure that when you are fighting that you take into account all the advantages your opponent has over you. Basically your opponent that is a different rank than you is most likely stronger than you and faster. Unless you have SC's. Also you must take into account their elements and specialties. If they are dominant in taijutsu and you are dominant in ninjutsu the taijutsu user is going to be faster and stronger.
3. Be sure to list the jutsu you used in a spoiler at the bottom as well as how much chakra you have left and what weapons you used.
Jutsu Used:
Bla bla bla chidorisomething or other and it's description.
Chakra: 25/75
Kunai Remaining: 1/5
Shuriken Remaining: 20/20
Senbon Remaining: 0/30
Please use a template similar to this. It helps a lot.